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You do not notice how much you need to work to better your writing. I was convinced that my Wp1 was very good until we worked on a few activities and I realized it needed more work. I think where I could have worked on is structuring my essay. I don’t think when I was writing I build my paragraphs of of each other and structural wise that is something I need to work on. I kind of just talk about my ideas in each with less of a structure. Right now I have three sources that star my paragraph and I need to change that to three ideas and then use the sources as a source. Moving forward there are changes I need to make. In the future I will make sure I organize my thoughts clearly before I type them into my essay or writing piece.Not only do I need to do that but I also need to make sure that when I am writing my essay I need to go back and read not just for punctuation mistakes but to make sure my structure is clear.
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Summary of paragraph
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Rap musicians often use their thoughts and feelings as an underlying meaning to what they write.
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Country music is targeted to young adults and adults and often uses an underlying meaning behind the lyrics
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R&B has a more romantic type of meaning behind the lyrics


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